A Dark and Deadly Sunrise

[mountaingal]

Re: A Dark and Deadly Sunrise

<div class="ubbcode-block"><div class="ubbcode-header">Originally Posted By: tuffstuff</div><div class="ubbcode-body">
Nice undertone u got going there Sprat </div></div>

fi real. &quot;dark side of paradise, the series&quot;

[mountaingal]

Re: A Dark and Deadly Sunrise

<div class="ubbcode-block"><div class="ubbcode-header">Originally Posted By: Sprat</div><div class="ubbcode-body"><span style="font-weight: bold">Life’s choices can turn into tragedy in an instant</span>, and paradise as we know it, even with its’ blue sky, calm waters and sunshine can rear it’s ugly head and turn dark and deadly.

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i think this is true of everywhere. human beings are human beings, whether in a sunny beachside town or a picture-postcard one with snow-bedecked trees and hills. the truism is not more or less intense because of the location.

i applaud your skills as a writer. i would ease up on the broad strokes, still.