A Story cont'd...

[Hush Darlin]

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Originally posted by Q.K:
[qb] Maybe you should try a Jamaican publishing company.
Mi tink dem ooda get di meanin! [img]/forums/images/graemlins/laugh.gif[/img] [/qb]

thats so true QK
she is very gifted and her story has potential

[QK13]

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Seetya...

From the Caribbean Yellow Pages...

[dr. bones]

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Wonderful, Nunya. I like how you let us use our imagination to wonder what happened to the others. I personally think Rocky and Jonesie got what they had coming to them, and were murdered. I also thought Irma and Mikey would end up togeter, but I guess I can be happy for Pauline and Mikey [img]/forums/images/graemlins/laugh.gif[/img]

Was this particular story one that you wrote in the past, or were you making up as you went along. Very creative and well thought out. Take that # from QK, and let us know how it turns out.

[championgal262]

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Nunya if you make a movie I want a part in it.

[ReggaeEbony]

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Great story. You really need fi find a publisher, keep trying and trying till u find one, figet one de odda one say and try some other one.

[sistactry]

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Originally posted by Q.K:
[qb] Maybe you should try a Jamaican publishing company.
Mi tink dem ooda get di meanin! [img]/forums/images/graemlins/laugh.gif[/img] [/qb]

u know how long she a sid down a fawm dyammm fool, fe real me wudda buy da book yaa..and from wha me see, nuff odders would to,

u good Nunya, u good, blessed my girl,

[sistactry]

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Originally posted by Nunya:
...the dialogue so that it would appeal to a wider audience. Only then would they accept it.

I am sure they had a point, for the dollar bottom line that is. However, I think that putting the conversations in english would be so... soulless???

fe real, it wudda really soulless fe chroo.., [img]/forums/images/graemlins/frown.gif[/img]

but u know how much ppl me try fe get fe read it, and dem a tell me fawt bout dem cyaan read patwa, u nuh sarry fe dem,

me say my girl, me nuh mek de mistake fe read dis pon de train nuh more.., me embarrass me self wha day, me naa do dat again, [img]/forums/images/graemlins/704555_dwl.gif[/img]

u ever get inna one laafing fit.., a feget a did which scene, but a laaf so till.., [img]/forums/images/graemlins/laugh.gif[/img]

good work again babes, me miss de breaks caa a juss since week, me get fe read it, tonks yaa Nunya,

when is de next one.., [img]/forums/images/graemlins/laugh.gif[/img]

[sistactry]

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Originally posted by championgal262:
[qb] Nunya if you make a movie I want a part in it. [/qb]

who u waan be, Beyoncina, [img]/forums/images/graemlins/704555_dwl.gif[/img] ((((CG)))))

[Leonie]

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Originally posted by Nunya:
[qb] ((((QK, 1stGen, Leonie &Cgal)))) Mi glad oonuu enjoy it! Leonie, it's like RL suggest - you decide wha happen to everybody

((((RL)))) One publisher told me that though they enjoy some work I had submitted, I needed to anglicize the dialogue so that it would appeal to a wider audience. Only then would they accept it.

I am sure they had a point, for the dollar bottom line that is. However, I think that putting the conversations in english would be so... soulless???

Glad you liked it! [/qb]

get one Jamaican publisher. Or submit it to the Star - dem always have stories along that line in the weekend Star (mi did think is there you did copy it from when you just started) Girl you good

[Nunya]

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(((ReggaeEbony))) Haven't seen you around these here parts lang time now... Glad you liked it.

So Leonie, yuh whenna call mi plagiarist eeh... an mi de yah nayin dah clue in... [img]/forums/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]

So Ctry, tell mi a which pawt did have yuh a look like eediat pan de train nuh [img]/forums/images/graemlins/704555_dwl.gif[/img]

Mi memba one time mi didda read supm pan de subway, an neva realise say mi a puddung one piece a cow bawling ~lol~ [img]/forums/images/graemlins/blush.gif[/img]

Until dis ol Jamaican lady pat mi pan mi showla an tell mi say maybe mi shouldan finish ie when mi get home... [img]/forums/images/graemlins/laugh.gif[/img]

[Leonie]

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sometmes when things sweet mi pan the train and mi start laugh to miself mi just turn it in a cough or if that dont help mi get off a the next stop, laff mi belly ful and catch the next train [img]/forums/images/graemlins/704555_dwl.gif[/img]

[championgal262]

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who u waan be, Beyoncina

Jim

[BoundBrook]

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BRAVO!! BRAVO!! BRAVO!!

Wonderful story Nunya

[Lacy]

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brap brap

I had several pages to catch up on.... and lawx mi tiad. [img]/forums/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img] Quite the exciting tale, Nunya. Like everyone else, I was at the end of every new installment and on the edge of my seat these last weeks.

Gwaan chroo, my girl.

[QK13]

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Anthony WInkler's Publisher:

LMH Publishing Limited
7 Norman Road
LOJ Industrial Complex
Building 10
Kingston C.S.O., Jamaica
876-938-0005; 938-0712
Fax: 876-759-8752
Email: [email protected]<br />Website: www.lmhpublishingjamaica.com

It's a good place to start! [img]/forums/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img] [img]/forums/images/graemlins/laugh.gif[/img]