Fair Citizen's of Board Lane, How is my Written Patois

[Tropicana]

I have been practicing here for years and I thought I had mastered it. I was recently told by more than one cousin that it totally sucks.

For example:

your patios is awful man

..and that was about my written patois.

About my spoken patois feedback was:

well thats another story.... its awful

And they ALL say the same thing.




So tell me isn't my written patois alright?

At the very least has there been improvement?

[j-kid]

So Tropi mi luv, which lie yuh want mi fi tell yuh first?

[Tropicana]

Is 'onesty mi a deal wid.

My cousins say my verbal patois is just awful. I have on occasion written in patois and they are also saying my WRITTEN patois is terrible.

I have been writing patois here for years. I think I am pretty good. What onoo ting? Onoo 'gree wid me ar dem?