HELP HELP HELP - Rephrase dis fimme

[WorshipRaiser]

Mi brain tired and mi can't rephrase this sentence.

<div class="ubbcode-block"><div class="ubbcode-header">Quote:</div><div class="ubbcode-body">Importantly, as students would rely on each other to play this game, they would discover the heightened level of reliance on each other in a band, choir or orchestra.</div></div>

Background - dem a play Emmanuel Road and u know how each person haffi pass dem rocks (or other item) on time around the circle? Dem have to rely on each other to mek it work. Mi waan seh dem a guh see similarity wid when dem ina orchestra or choir.

I've revised this more than twice aready but mi nuh tink mi tink there's a better way to seh weh mi waan seh.

[sistacaf]

Re: HELP HELP HELP - Rephrase dis fimme

&quot;Importantly, students must rely upon one another to play this game; similar to the heightened level of reliance that would be required to play in a band, choir or orchestra.&quot;

(or, in other words: &quot;teamwork is necessary for success&quot

[WorshipRaiser]

Re: HELP HELP HELP - Rephrase dis fimme

<div class="ubbcode-block"><div class="ubbcode-header">Originally Posted By: sistacaf</div><div class="ubbcode-body">&quot;Importantly, students must rely upon one another to play this game; similar to the heightened level of reliance that would be required to play in a band, choir or orchestra.&quot;

(or, in other words: &quot;teamwork is necessary for success&quot
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Hey, thanks so much. I like your version a lot. Gonna edit it a bit to seh:

&quot;Importantly, students must rely on each other to play this game; a similar level of reliance is required to play in a band, choir or orchestra.&quot;

...u si? All I needed was an idea! Thanks much SistaCaf!

[sistacaf]

Re: HELP HELP HELP - Rephrase dis fimme

Is my pleasure PDB!
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