How Edit this?

[ILP]

OK, so mi juss get this inna mi email box with instructions fi edit it before im send it out. Personally mi think this email is kinna renk, but mi not gwine tell im daht. Smaddy help mi fix it. Seet below:


<span style="font-weight: bold"><span style="font-style: italic">Good Afternoon,

In an effort to ensure effective communication, all staff should discuss with myself (or in my absence- Mr. XXX) before sending emails to the entire staff (DL).



Ediat in Chawge, but mi have big tikkle
Principal, Backrah Lives High School</span></span>

[CeaBee]

Re: How Edit this?

me doan like this part...edit it and mek it more flowwy

all staff should discuss with myself (or in my absence- Mr. XXX) before sending emails to the entire staff (DL).

[ILP]

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so dont explain why dem muss juss get di DL approve?

[CeaBee]

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yes but that sentence doan flow...sounds akward (sp)

[ILP]

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now mi confuse...yours or his?

[CeaBee]

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[ILP]

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wah you a bawl fah?

ok, how dis sound cah mi want send it off ahn leave fah di day.



<span style="font-style: italic"><span style="font-weight: bold">Good Afternoon,

In an effort to ensure effective communication, please discuss your DL's with me (or XXX in my absence) prior to sending them out to the staff.

Ediat in Chawge, but mi have big tikkle
Principal, Backrah Lives High School</span></span>

[CeaBee]

Re: How Edit this?

whats a DL?

[ILP]

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distribution list &lt;---- i think.

[Bandana]

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Please note that effective immediately all staff will be required to discuss with myself or (Mr.XXX in my absence) before sending out e-mails to the entire staff.

[CeaBee]

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<div class="ubbcode-block"><div class="ubbcode-header">Originally Posted By: Hibern8ting_ILP</div><div class="ubbcode-body">distribution list &lt;---- i think. </div></div>

suh is the distribution list them want to discuss, or the content of the email ?

[Bandana]

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<div class="ubbcode-block"><div class="ubbcode-header">Originally Posted By: Hibern8ting_ILP</div><div class="ubbcode-body">distribution list &lt;---- i think. </div></div>

yes



so is the recipients im want to discuss?

[Bandana]

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<div class="ubbcode-block"><div class="ubbcode-header">Originally Posted By: ceabee</div><div class="ubbcode-body"><div class="ubbcode-block"><div class="ubbcode-header">Originally Posted By: Hibern8ting_ILP</div><div class="ubbcode-body">distribution list &lt;---- i think. </div></div>

suh is the distribution list them want to discuss or the email itself before it gets sent out? </div></div>

[CeaBee]

Re: How Edit this?

<div class="ubbcode-block"><div class="ubbcode-header">Originally Posted By: BanDanna</div><div class="ubbcode-body"><div class="ubbcode-block"><div class="ubbcode-header">Originally Posted By: ceabee</div><div class="ubbcode-body"><div class="ubbcode-block"><div class="ubbcode-header">Originally Posted By: Hibern8ting_ILP</div><div class="ubbcode-body">distribution list &lt;---- i think. </div></div>

suh is the distribution list them want to discuss or the email itself before it gets sent out? </div></div>


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cum out

[Bandana]

Re: How Edit this?

<div class="ubbcode-block"><div class="ubbcode-header">Originally Posted By: ceabee</div><div class="ubbcode-body">

cum out </div></div>

I neva!