Jamaican translation needed!

[marija]

Hello all!
I'm in need of Jamaican translation of a few sentences that are in English as a part of one scenario for short film. I would appreciate any help because this topic is strange to me and I don't know whom should I turn to. Many thanks in advance

Here are the sentences that I need help with:
Shut up!!Or… I will fill your mouth with stones!
MOM! If you don’t stop it… I will get a stick and kill you all!
Where the hell did you come out from??

[Magician]

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What's the context of this exchange?

[marija]

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Hi Magix!
I have a little problem with translation in Jamaican. These sentences are part of a script for a short film which is going to be filmed next week. It is a comedy script and there is a young man who will have to say these sentences in Jamaican. Maybe the sentences sound a little bit rude but I assure you that isn't the real situation in the script. All the other text is in macedonian/english language. Didn't know who to ask for help and that is why I posted here.

[blugiant]

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<div class="ubbcode-block"><div class="ubbcode-header">Originally Posted By: marija</div><div class="ubbcode-body">Hello all!
I'm in need of Jamaican translation of a few sentences that are in English as a part of one scenario for short film. I would appreciate any help because this topic is strange to me and I don't know whom should I turn to. Many thanks in advance

Here are the sentences that I need help with:

Where the hell did you come out from??

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fram de day yu bawn yu a crasses

dem more helpfull yaawdees soon cum cah mii natt dat helpfull

[Pepper]

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Shut up!!Or… I will fill your mouth with stones!

<span style="font-weight: bold">Shet up, or me gwine full up yuh mouth wid rockstone</span>

MOM! If you don’t stop it… I will get a stick and kill you all!

<span style="font-weight: bold">Auntie, if yuh nuh stop it, me gwine grab one tick an kill all a unno.</span>

Where the hell did you come out from??

<span style="font-weight: bold">Where di hell yuh a come from?</span>

Will I be getting paid for this translation?

[mountaingal]

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the sayings arent very idiomatic. dont know of any jamaican who threatens to fill smaddy else mout wid rackstone.

[marija]

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Oh, thank you so much Pepper! Means so much to me! And if the film makes it on the box office, you'll get a reward for sure
Thanks again

[CyberPhobic]

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<div class="ubbcode-block"><div class="ubbcode-header">Originally Posted By: marija</div><div class="ubbcode-body">Oh, thank you so much Pepper! Means so much to me! And if the film makes it on the <span style="font-weight: bold">box office</span>, you'll get a reward for sure
Thanks again </div></div>

Apawt fram di fack dat yuh lines nuh mekk nuh sense, enny J'can whe treaten dem madda dem kynda way dey, only aguh get wan BOX, and it naaguh have nutt'n fi do wid nuh office.

A wan BAX DUNG demmaguh get. ====&gt;

[Magician]

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<div class="ubbcode-block"><div class="ubbcode-header">Originally Posted By: CyberPhobic</div><div class="ubbcode-body">

Apawt fram di fack dat yuh lines nuh mekk nuh sense, enny J'can whe treaten dem madda dem kynda way dey, only aguh get wan BOX, and it naaguh have nutt'n fi do wid nuh office.

A wan BAX DUNG demmaguh get. ====&gt; </div></div>

[R_C]

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marija, these sentences sound very odd, I've never heard any Jamaican speak like this. So before you use a Jamaican patois equivalent of these strange phrases, I have an idea.

How about asking a Jamaican to help you with writing this part of the script from scratch. The dialogue would be a lot more authentic than when you have it &quot;translated&quot; <span style="font-weight: bold">after it was already written</span> by someone who (obviously) doesn't understand our idioms. We are not hard to find..we're everywhere !

Good luck with your film !

[Gen]

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BOAL a deading

Mi was a wonder bout the lines but mi figure by time it get to ny dem wouldan work out the kinks

[SandiF]

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is ongle a blastid crasses pickney would a chat to dem madda dat dey way